grammar question, using because repeatedly?

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<p>For my essay, I used the word 'because' a lot to create......ur..I don't really know what to call this but it kinda goes like this :</p>

<p>They call me stupid because I like pies, cakes, and berries. Because I like to listen to piano, violin, and flute. Because I like to watch comedy, tragedy, and drama. </p>

<p>This is not my essay, I just wrote that to show how my essay is like. I used 'because' many times like that but is this correct? Can you start the sentence with because many times like that..?</p>

<p>Thanks,</p>

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<p>I think it’s perfectly fine since creative writing does not have to strictly follow all grammar rules… but then again, I don’t know what an adcom would think.</p>

<p>Talk to an English teacher and have the person read your essay.</p>

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<p>It’s not grammatically correct because you don’t have a complete sentence, but it’s a playful use of words. In today’s writing, you can probably get away with it. You might want to check with an English teacher, who can see that you maintain that same flow throughout.</p>