<p>I guess I am very wordy! I ended up with a nearly 800 word essay when I was supposed to have 500. It is on a topic of my choice. Would anyone be so kind to read it and tell me if any parts are noticably unclear or weak? </p>
<p>Just let me know and I will pm it to you. If you would like me to read an essay in return, I would love to--I am so sick of looking at my own essay!</p>
<p>Thanks. ;)</p>