<p>Hola, I was wondering if anyone would read my essay and tell me if it's alright. The problem is that it's for the Common App, with a 500-word maximum. Originally, my essay was 1,074 words, and I managed to cut it down to 631 words. I'm looking for advice as to how I could cut it more, and general advice on the topic/writing, etc. </p>
<p>Thank you. <3</p>
<p>. . . . . bump :)</p>
<p>Sure! I'll proofread it for you! Email me: <a href="mailto:soham.gandhi@gmail.com">soham.gandhi@gmail.com</a> Bye.</p>
<p>thank you!</p>
<p>if you pm it to me i'll help cut it down for you.</p>
<p>mail me to <a href="mailto:oneandonlyanurodh@gmail.com">oneandonlyanurodh@gmail.com</a> with the subject "Essay"</p>
<p>I'm happy to help. PM me.</p>
<p>i'd be happy to help, pm me</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>PM me</p>
<p>thank you!</p>
<p>if you want, ill read it and help cut it or whatever you want! (gotta love having free time on thanksgiving break...)</p>