Happy Snow! Would anyone like to read my Why CAS essay? :)

<p>Hi! If any of you folks got some free time on your hands, it would be really helpful if someone read my essay and let me know what I still need the work on. The current draft is pretty weak but I am not sure where to go from here. Please leave a post and I will PM you.
Thanks so much!
Also, ED acceptee and current Cornell students are preferred :)</p>

<p>PM it over. I’m an ED acceptee</p>

<p>Sure, send pm</p>

<p>hmmm well, I’m a fellow RD applicant, but if you wouldn’t mind, I would be happy to look over it for you.</p>

<p>Bumpppp - submitting tonight, kind of need a lot of help still haha</p>