Help critique my UC prompts

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone be willing to help give me feedback on my UC personal statements with their spare time? My grammar is also really bad, and I've proof-read it a couple times already to correct the silly mistakes, but could you also help me correct the syntax and punctuation errors also?</p>

<p>Thanks, help would be well appreciated.</p>

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<p>ill take a look</p>

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<p>i'll look at it.</p>

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<p>anyone else? I could use some constructive criticism and grammar corrections for my essays.</p>

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<p>I will give you a fair/ yet a harsh criticism</p>

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<p>i could take a look if you want pm me pls. tx</p>