Help Editing my Essay!

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Hi, </p>

<p>I am getting ready to submit my application to Cornell ILR School. But I really really need help with my essay. English is not my first language so I'd like to get advice on my essays as much as I can. </p>

<p>Can someone please give me an opinion?? Let me know and I'll be happy to email you my essay. I'd really appreciate that! </p>

<p>Many thanks!</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to help :)</p>

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<p>Feel free to PM me :)</p>

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<p>I would be more than happy to help! You can PM me if you like. :)</p>

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<p>you can PM me and ill be happy to edit it or revise it (:</p>