<p>Hello, so i am applying to a university and the prompts are as follows </p>
<p>The personal statements are a very important part of your application. They assist the university in knowing you as an individual, independent of test scores and other objective data. We ask that you respond to two of the topics below. Your personal statement should be no longer than a total of 500 words or 7000 characters for both statements combined. The best personal statements are not necessarily the longest ones.</p>
<p>If there has been some obstacle or "bump in the road," in your academic or personal life, please explain the circumstances.</p>
<p>How has your family history, culture or environment influenced who you are?</p>
<p>Why did you choose to apply to UCF?</p>
<p>What qualities or unique characteristics do you possess that would allow you to contribute to the UCF community?</p>
<p>i wrote about the 2nd choice and the last choice but i think i want to make them into one essay. Would anyone proof read them for me? Maybe give me some pointers about what to add or take out and grammatical errors?</p>