Help me with my Harvard/Yale essay??

<p>I'm working on the additional essays for Harvard and Yale. Since they are so open ended, I figured it'd make sense to write one essay for both of them so that I can really polish it before I submit my applications (I think that's a pretty standard thing to do in this situation, anyway). However, I'm struggling to find a topic that I think truly reveals something about myself that meets the Harvard/Yale standard. I've written an essay, but I'm unsure if the topic is quality or if I've executed it effectively. I'd appreciate any readers, but I'd rather not give it to any current seniors applying to either of these schools. You know how it is. Regardless, post here or PM me and I'll send it along. Thanks much!</p>

<p>I would be happy to review and offer input.</p>

<p>Bump 10char</p>

<p>I’d be happy to take a look. I’m 30, so definitely not applying to either school :slight_smile: </p>