My new essay could use a bit of critique

<p>I just finished writing my second essay which I will send as a supplemental essay to Harvard and Yale. It could use a bit of editing though. Anyone feeling up to it?</p>

<p>Anyone? The deadline looms ahead...</p>

<p>sure pm it over</p>

<p>i'd love to help</p>

<p>I'll help but please note I am applying to these schools as well.</p>