<p>kelloggs or anybody! I need help with Writing so badly! I am stuck at 700 (-5 in total). I know that with writing you don’t even need perfect MC to get 800, so how can I get to high 700s in a week (-2 or -1 on MC consistently)??? </p>
<p>Please help me out Canadians and other CC’ers! I need to nail this section, then move onto CR and try my best to get low 700s. </p>
<p>ONE WEEK:
let me know what YOU would do, honestly, if you had 1 week to get your W score from 680-700 to 800. I’m at, once again, -6 to -5 maximum errors in W. I need to get to -2 or -1 in total in ONE WEEK. </p>
<p>Whatever you would do, please let me know. This is a serious question. time is of the essence right now. I need to do this in a week and then move onto trying to nail the CR section (want low 700s…i’m at around 670-680ish). Help me please.</p>
<p>I am seriously going to do anything that you tell me to do. I want to get some tips and advice. I will literally only come back onto CC in a week after I do whatever you guys advise me to do. I get 10 essays consistently…will try to tweak before the SAT to have a shot at 12…want to get at least 11 on the essay though. So, if I can get -2 on W…i give myself a shot at 800, and at least, worst case scenario, 770. </p>
<p>Here is an essay I wrote today: </p>
<p>PROMPT: Is conscience a more powerful motivator than money, fame, or power?</p>
<p>It is a turbulent time in India, with violence and injustice surrounding the nation. The country is in a time of change, seeking independence from the British forces. You, in an attempt to lead a non-violent revolt, are in the midst of a month-long fast, while you pray and plead for the citizens of India to not raise a hand against the British army. Are you suffering and pleading for fame? For money? For power? Of course not. The struggles of Mahatma Gandhi and Craig Kielburger signify that a clear, strong conscience is a far more powerful motivator that money, fame, or power. They made their choices on the basis of right and wrong, signifying that a clear conscience is the most powerful motivator.</p>
<p>India’s charge for independence was led by the reticent and pacifist leader, Mahatma Gandhi, who was driven by a powerful conscience over money, fame, or power. Gandhi led a non-violent revolt against Britain. He lived by the mantra “an eye for an eye will make the world blind”. He believed that fighting with violence was unacceptable and went on, what seemed like, perpetual fasts at one point in time to further his cause. He was at the butt-end of racial jokes and hatred from the British, yet he persevered through such torture just to deliver his notion of independence through non-violence. Only a strong conscience would lead one to such extremes towards furthering a cause. Gandhi was driven by a strong conscience and nothing more, signifying that a conscience is, indeed, a more powerful motivator than any other.</p>
<p>In what one may consider a more contemporary example of a strong conscience leading a political charge, teenage Craig Kielburger founded Free The Children to further his fight for the eradication of child labor. Craig Kielburger, a teenage Canadian when he founded Free The Children, was motivated to develop what is now an internationally recognized organization when he read an article in the newspaper about a Pakistani boy being killed due to child labor. His conscience led him to develop a small campaign against child labor. Slowly and steadily, Free The Children blossomed into the international influence that it is now. Kielburger was driven by what was right and wrong, not by money, power, or fame. He was just an average adolescent who wanted justice to be served and sought to abolish inhumane child labor from our planet. Kielburger’s ambitious, successful endeavor was led by his conscience and no other influence, showing that such a motivator is paramount over all others.</p>
<p>Gandhi and Kielburger show us that a conscience is indeed the most powerful motivator. They were led by what is right and wrong. The humane side of our species proves to be the most powerful factor and in turn, a greater motivator than all the money, fame, and power in the world.</p>
<p>***in the box with some background info. it mentioned stuff about how what is right and wrong is the most powerful motivator and stuff, so i incorporated that into the essay. </p>
<p>What score would this be? (filled up the entire 2 pages by the way)</p>