<p>Just another highschooler here commenting , so don’t think of my opinion as reliable, but;</p>
<p>Of the three topics, I personally would love to read about number 2 the most. However, since you don’t want an awkward sob story, then I’ll go for number one. Somehow, the essay topic sounds a bit trite to me, but in all honesty, it’s really hard to find a grateful kid these days who actually know how a parent feels about their child. But of course, if she pushed you to do your very best in school, I hope you actually did your best in school. Or else don’t mention that school part.</p>
<p>But if you do that one be sure to not focus too much on your mom.
If you still remember that single moment of realization of how much your mom has sacrificed and struggled for you, you should definitely include it. In my opinion, that first moment, or epiphany, is priceless. So if you can remember a single moment where everything kind of revealed itself to you, or a single event that had great impact, I’d recommend you to talk about specifically that in the essay somewhere. It’s like providing an example. And be sure to include your feelings at that time, or what you think you felt. Then draw out from that moment and connect it to the overall push and changes made.</p>
<p>Or about your dad; personally, I would begin about how devastating it was. But in order to try to avoid a sob story: Don’t focus on your dad abusing you. Just mention it - briefly. Two sentences or so. Preferably less. One beautiful sentence should be enough. Again, be sure to focus on yourself and your own thoughts. Then like what I said above, try to recall a single moment of momentous impact. And draw it out from that. THIS GIVES YOU A GREAT CHANCE TO USE PARALLEL STRUCTURE TO IMPRESS THE ADMISSION PEOPLE MAYBE LOL.</p>
<p>From Caribbean to NY, describe the environment a bit. If you can actually tap into your subconscious behavior and perception, that would be priceless. Then again, focus on yourself.</p>
<p>(even though I’m a bit afraid to follow my own advice), I think you should describe yourself before you were able to overcome your challenges. And don’t be afraid to show your despondent state. It takes skill to describe a pitiful situation that happened to you without implying that you are self-pitying. Show your own negatives as well as the positives. Personally I like the people better who can see their own possible shortcomings in any situation. Just make sure any negatives you mention do not detract from the NET POSITIVE. So no potential negative numbers ok.</p>
<p>Also, maybe start with a narrative. Then go into despondency maybe, then that single moment, your epiphany, and who you are now. And be vivid. Don’t be boring. You have good topics so don’t waste them.</p>
<p>(Once again) I’m not an adult and I haven’t even written anything for my own essays yet, so, as mentioned, I’m not sure if what I said is even good for consideration. Nevertheless, good luck on your essay! c:</p>