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College Essays
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<p>Can anyone give me honest feedback on my common app essay and correct the grammar?
I'll look at any essays if you want me to as well.</p>

2

<p>I’ll look at it, if you look at my common app essay as well!</p>

3

<p>I’ll look at it :smiley:
Where’s my cookie!</p>

4

<p>Mazorak: PM me your essay
Flapjacklux: I sent it to you
Thanks guys!</p>

5

<p>i gotchuuu !</p>