READ my college essay and I'll give you a cookie :)

College Essays
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<p>Hi guys! I really want people's opinion of my college essay. I will only send to established CCers (over 100 posts) and who are not in high school (unless you want to swap)
What I need help with is:
1. After reading this essay, who do you think I am as a person? VERY IMPORTANT FOR ME TO KNOW! :)
2. Edit grammar mistakes :) i hate grammar..too many run-ons I know,but can you help fix them?
3.Do you like this essay? how to fix if not. I HATE conclusion!!! what should I do?? </p>

<p>But before I send you my essay I just want to warn you that I have already sent this essay for my rolling admission college. So be warned, copy it and they will find out! My rolling admission college was my safety, but now I really want to edit my essay fully for my reach colleges. Thankss :)</p>

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<p>bumpppp…
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<p>You can send it to me. I’m not a great student like some people on this board, but I got a 5 on my ap english test so I’m not terrible.</p>

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<p>bumpppppppppppppp</p>

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<p>would you like to swap essays? what you need help with are the same things i do :D</p>