Help! Which Essay Should I Use?

<p>Deadline's January 1. I'm not sure which essay to use for the main part of the common application.</p>

<p>One does more of the "show rather than tell" thing, but I think the other conveys more powerfully important information about me that couldn't really be jammed into the additional info section.</p>

<p>Opinions on which I should use?</p>

<p>Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>By the way, these essays are for about twelve schools including ivies.</p>

<p>im having the same problem, except the one that shows more about me isn't done yet..but i feel it has the potential to be better than the one I already wrote (although people seem to like this one)....grr cannot decide ;p...i can take a look at urs if u want to pm them...</p>

<p>I'll read it. Just PM me.</p>

<p>Use the essay that is the most personal, detailed, honest and revealing.</p>

<p>sure send it over</p>