<p>i have too essays.
i fear the first is
-cliche
-telling instead of showing
-and too dramatic.</p>
<p>the second i fear is
-choppy
-irritating
but less cliche.</p>
<p>and theyre on the same thing.</p>
<p>can anyone read them and help me out? thanks :)</p>
<p>...please :)</p>
<p>Sure! That is, if you don't mind having someone that's applying and writing essays as we speak read your essays. I'm being honest. And I promise not to steal anything, of course.</p>
<p>sent, thanks</p>
<p>anyone else?</p>
<p>sure! i can review it for you</p>
<p>watch for people with low post counts, as that shows just how often a person browses this site. I'd be willing to look over your essays if you'd like. PM.</p>
<p>sent them, thanks</p>
<p>i can help if you would likeeeeeee</p>
<p>anyone else?</p>
<p>i have the same problem! anyone wants to read both of mine two? </p>
<p>i'll read urs if you'll read mine, klynchhhh.</p>
<p>thanks, anyone else? one more?</p>