help with essay that... ehhh... well, just read it and see what i mean

<p>My essay is about an experience that impacted me, but i am concerned that it is more of strictly about the ec, not how it changed my life... anyone wanna rip it apart?</p>

<p>I can give it a shot. PM me</p>

<p>I’ll take a look for sure. PM. =]</p>

<p>sure, just PM me</p>

<p>Sure, pm it over</p>