Please read my common ap essay

[tas2011]

<p>I did the one about a significant experience. I actually wrote 2 different essays. They are on the same topic but they focus on slightly different things. I am not sure which one would be better or if any. Constructive criticism is very much appreciated.</p>

[elbeeen]

<p>I’ll edit yours if you edit mine :)</p>

[darknessmysti]

<p>I’ll help you.
Sent it across! =)</p>

[cathyjjang92]

<p>PM me i want to help</p>

[miss_murd3r]

<p>Send it over.</p>

[amylilygrl]

<p>I’ll be willing to look at it ^-^ I’m still waiting for criticism on mine O:</p>

[UrM0mGoes2Colege]

<p>sure. PM it!</p>

[mbsquash217]

<p>I’ll read it! pm</p>

[president2040]

<p>pm if needed</p>

[ModelT]

<p>lemme read!</p>

[bandgeek05]

<p>I’ll read.</p>

[iwantyale]

<p>PM me…ill also read</p>