Help with my common app essay?

<p>I've written my common app essay on a prompt of my choice but it has received much criticism by CCers so I've decided to change topics. I have decided to use the influential person prompt and write about Richard Dawkins. I want to write about his passion for what he does and how he's such a good speaker. Thing is, how can I connect it to ME? given that colleges want to learn about me, not someone else. Also, how can I go into talking about Dawkins? Thanks</p>