Help with shortening essay

<p>Finally finished with my common app essay, only issue is that it is about 250 words over the limit. I've already cut it down a lot myself but I can't decide what else to eliminate. Please post here or PM me if you're willing to help me out. Thanks a lot!</p>

<p>Pm it to me.</p>

<p>can help with flow , and length as well
PM please</p>

<p>bump .</p>