Help me make my essay shorter!

Applying to College
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<p>My common app essay is 650 words..and I need to get it down at lest 100 words</p>

<p>If anyone is interested in reading/editing it that would be extremely appreciated! Also, harsh criticism is welcomed :)</p>

<p>I'll PM it to you if you're interested</p>

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<p>mines 650 words too, but i think thats fine. some people's are like 800. you can send it to me if you want and i'll look at it.</p>