<p>Hey guys I have written an essay for stanford for intellectual vitality. It's about computer science. I was hoping one of you could give me some tips on it, as well as correct any grammatical errors. Post if you want me to PM it to you, and thanks a lot in advance!!!!</p>
<p>If you want I can give it a look! Can you read my Common App Essay?</p>
<p>You can send it to me if you want. </p>
<p>AND YAY FOR COMPUTER SCIENCE!!! :D</p>
<p>I’d be happy to help! just pm me. it would be great if you could give me help with one my Stanford essays too, but it’s fine if you don’t want to.</p>