<p>could you guys review my essay?</p>
<p>Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve. You can type directly into the box, or you can paste text from another source. (250-650 words)</p>
<p>Since a very young age, I demonstrated an interest in computer technology. I never doubt I would end up studying something related to it. I am completing an Associate in Arts (A.A.) in Computer Information System in my current school, Miami Dade College (MDC), and I plan to continue my education to a baccalaureate level. Unfortunately the college I am currently attending does not offer the program I want to pursue, this situation lead me to explore for others Universities. By transferring I expect to earn my bachelor Degree and ultimately go to graduate school.</p>
<p>I enjoy challenges, and I believe you need to get out of your comfort zone to succeed. Following this philosophy, I challenged myself to complete my A.A. in less than two years, and I can state I did. I took five classes in summer, being mathematics one of those classes. Most people told me it was going to be challenging, but I propose myself I would get a 4.0 that semester. As my transcript shows, I did. With this stated, I believe this new University will have new challenges and opportunities for me. I am ready to face them and to succeed. </p>
<p>As it can be seen, I always accomplish what I propose. I have done well in Miami Dade College, and I improve not just on my education aspect, but I also grow as a person. I am part of the Honor society and a Student Leader of MDC METS. I enjoyed the time I spend in MDC, but I believe I'm prepared to make the next step of my educational journey, and enroll in a program that matches my career interest.</p>
<p>Thank you!</p>