Hey, can anyone read my Common App transfer essay?

College Essays
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<p>Just finished a draft - I'd really appreciate if you could read it and see if it's any good. I'll read one of yours in return.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. I give harsh criticism though!</p>

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<p>I PM’ed you. Anybody else willing to read? If you like ripping essays apart, you might like mine… haha</p>

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<p>Bump…</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to read yours if you PM it on over. I’m not going to be a jerk about it, but I’m also pretty good on criticism. Mind looking mine over as well?</p>

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<p>I PM’ed you - send me your essay whenever and I’ll take a look!</p>

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<p>Bump .</p>

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<p>Bumping again - looking for advice, will read your essay back!</p>

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<p>send me. Im brutally honest. read mine if you want and be brutally honest too.</p>

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<p>Go for it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it over for you if you wish.</p>

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<p>yeah, I hate this essay</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll read</p>

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<p>Pm me as well</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you edit mine for me! PM your essay if you’re interested</p>

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<p>PM me as well and we can swap essays.</p>

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<p>Hey I will read it too! PM me… if you can read mine too, that would be great!</p>