<p>Would anyone like me to pm my essay so he may rate it pls, id reaaallly appreciate it :) </p>
<p>Dude! Do not post an admissions essay here unless you want it ripped off by someone else, exposing you to a plagiarism charge. Edit your post ASAP.</p>
<p>Pls if anyone would like to see my essay just comment here plssss, i need your help desperately 
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<p>I’ll read. :)</p>
<p>sure</p>