<p>Hey if anyone's willing to look over my common app essay, that'd be great. It's about my transition from childhood to adulthood. You can critique grammar or content or whatever! Also Idk if I'm really feeling my intro, so any help would be appreciated! I'll deff read your essay back in return! Haha thanks!!! </p>
<p>I'll PM you my essay if your willing!</p>
<p>Sure. I would be happy to review and provide my feedback.</p>
<p>i’d love to read it :)</p>
<p>i’ll read and critique it!</p>
<p>Bump 10 char!</p>
<p>I can critique it!</p>
<p>I’ll help you :)</p>
<p>Pm me yours and I’ll pm you mine</p>
<p>I can’t give you much help about grammar, but I would read it, if you PM it to me</p>
<p>^^ I am looking for some advice too!</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it! 
I have extensive experience with editing essays, both on CC.com and as a coach at my school’s writing center, so hopefully I can be of some help to you 
Just PM me and I’ll give you my email address.</p>
<p>i would like to read it for you.</p>