I’ve written basically my whole story so that you can get a sense of my personality and why I want to go to Cornell. It’s a lot, but I would be ever-so appreciative for some feedback and advice. Thank you for your time!
Class of 2019, anyone?
Background: I’m a first generation student in the 9th grade. I was born in India and my family migrated to the U.S. when I was 2. I am the oldest of 4 children and my family receives a relatively low income. I consider myself to be hardworking and people often tell me that I am a very ambitious and self determined person. I have a love for learning which is why I convinced my parents to take me to a testing session for an honors school that has an IB diploma program, and I got in.
Education: I just transferred this year to an honors school and I plan on graduating with an IB Diploma. I am very interested in science which is why I will be skipping lunch in 11th and 12th grade to take IB Biology, IB Physics, and AP Chemistry (All are 2 year courses). I am debating taking either AP Calculus or AP Statistics senior year.
In 8th grade I took regents algebra and regents biology, scoring a 98 in biology and a 74 in algebra. Fearing having to retake algebra the following year I prepared myself during the summer to retake the exam in August. Though I worked hard, I scored an 84. I was 1 point off the passing requirement of 85 and had to take the class again. I met with my guidance counselor once and then vice principal 3 times and then the principal once (I’m sorry if I seem whiney to you). Reason being I was willing to skip lunch this year and take both geometry and algebra; they refused with the fear of setting a precedent. Now I’m retaking the class with an average of A+ each semester. I have a 4.0 GPA as of now with an A+ in every class except Gym(B+) and History (A-) because I’m generally not interested in it. I am aware that good grades are a given requirement for HYPSC and I’m working on my EC. 
Accomplishments: Not impressive – Coming from a foreign state, I speak 4 languages including English, Kashmiri, Urdu, and Hindi. I can read and write Arabic and I’m learning Spanish in school right now.
As for scholarships, I don’t know what I can do right now as a 9th grader. I do read voraciously and I plan on studying works of literature in the summer so that I can advance my technique more and start applying for scholarships in 10th grade when I’m taking AP Literature and Composition. I also plan on studying chemistry in the summer because it’s interesting and I will be taking it in 10th grade. I like to spend my allowance at garage sales buying used school textbooks so that I can read them later.
I’m very interested in art and I’ve had my art exhibited before. I’ve been told that I’m very good at drawing and I draw a lot but all I’ve done is design the yearbook cover twice for my last school.
I’ve also built the PC that I’m currently using right now.
Extra Curricular: Not impressive – I’ve recently joined the tennis team at my school; It’s my first time playing a sport and I’m not very good but I enjoy it. I plan on doing both tennis and cross country as a sport throughout high school. I also tutor peers in both Algebra and Biology after school. I volunteer at a hospital on weekends for 8 hours and I plan on volunteering more in the summer. I used to play the violin well in middle school but I had to quit so that I could apply for my school’s science research program.
From October to December 2015 I was a candidate applying for a Science Research Program at my school along with 40 other students. Part of the qualification was taking AP Biology for those 3 months and making the top 13 of the group through test scores and evaluation. Through my perseverance and determination I managed rank 1. I along with the other 11 students got interviewed by a doctor willing to mentor 6 of us. Unfortunately I didn’t get selected and this was extremely discouraging to me, considering all of the hard work and time I put into it. A while later the doctor emailed me, offering an opportunity to go to the lab and do research in the area of bioformatics after school. I was the only student of the 7 that didn’t get selected to take up the offer. I just started working at the lab today and I really like what I’m doing, but I don’t plan on entering any science fairs in the future because my assigned research isn’t compelling enough.
My dream is to become a cardiothoracic surgeon and work in NYC while also working on cancer research - call me naïve. Cornell is my top school because of their outstanding premed program that will prepare me for getting into a good medical school. I’m writing all this right now because I’m not sure how to progress from what I’m currently doing right now and I’m wondering if I actually have the potential to get into this college. I would also appreciate any recommendations for activities that Cornell will like and that I might be interested in.
Thank you!