<p>No...I requested human scoring this morning...and within an hour, Tom Robinson emailed me. Let's just say he owned me:</p>
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Dear Justin,</p>
<p>Remember that RocketScore is just a computer, and so it always has to make "judgment calls" about whether a particular example is relevant or not.</p>
<p>Most of your essay was on topic, and some slight digressions are not a big deal since the graders (human graders, which RocketScore just mimics) realize that you're writing under pressure.</p>
<p>Also, RocketScore can't tell whether you're using big words (which it likes to see) like surreptitious organically, or just "citing" the word without actually using it.</p>
<p>In other words, RocketScore ASSUMES (as do human graders) that you're writing a legitimate essay, and not just playing around.</p>
<p>As I explain at length in the book, you should use ACADEMIC examples that "show off" (subtly) that you're a strong student who's learned a lot in school and is trying to apply that information in your essay. Harry Potter (and any OTHER example that you're writing off the top of your head, without having had the benefit of studying it in detail, and DISCUSSING it, and hearing the thoughts of others in your class) is a BIG RISK.</p>
<p>This essay would have received a 9 from a human grader, and since RocketScore can't tell that Harry Potter is a "pop culture example", a human grader might even have knocked you down a notch to an 8 (also with that weird citation of surreptitious).</p>
<p>Finally, using two and ideally three examples is better than an extended (and, as you point out, often extraneous) discussion of a single example.</p>
<p>Sincerely,</p>
<p>Adam Robinson</p>
<p>RocketReview</p>
<p>PS: You're a senior, so you should try to apply yourself to applying what you've learned in the book, Justin, it will help your score a lot.
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