there’s a 300 word limit and Im not very sure on how to tie it up. Any suggestions?
Also can anyone read my why NU essay?
@jaecha sure I can read it…as far as concluding I had several why essays some of them I ended with something that brings it full circle like if I opened with say for example a discussion about frogs I like mentioned frogs again at the end(just an example lol I didn’t do this :D) or for others I ended with something more serious like what’s important to me or wat I look forward to for the college experience…it just kind of depended on the tone and theme of my essay they were all different
Sure, just pm me.
Anything but, “…and THIS is why I want to study at college X” would suffice. I sort of have a literary affinity for hooks and closings so if you would like to shoot your essay my way, I’d love to give you some feedback.
tell us the topic of the essay. I would put something like “every aspiration is done with (adjective) and with my priorities in mind, (state priorities and determination)”
I could help as well if you’re still looking!
Don’t know if you still want another point of view but I can take a look as well.
I can help out, pm me if you still need another point of view