<p>Thanks in advance for your time.
So,i have worked on my Commonapp essay and I'm in the final draft stage.Everyone who has read it says that it is very personal and beautifully-written but could use some help with the flow.Unfortunately,I'm an international student from Ghana currently in the States and my not-so computer literate parents(no offense intended, please;I love my parents!lol) who would do this for me aren't here to help me work this problem out.I'll be very glad if I could have surrogate parent(s) here help with my essay at this point.I'm really stressed out and stuck on the flow....</p>
<p>Counting on your help as parents.Please let me know and I will PM you the essay.
Thanks once again.</p>
<p>P.S-I used the term "not-so computer literate" because my parents have limited access to the Internet back in Ghana.I'm first-generation but my parents have fully supported me this far despite their low finances and inability to go beyond high school.Parents are gifts to the world!!</p>