<p>Sex sells :P True description. </p>
<p>I just need someone to take a final look at my essays before i click submitt. Please, I'll send you my pic as well if you think I lied to you. Any takers?</p>
<p>I don't get it. Is your essay about a description of yourself?</p>
<p>Nope. I was just trying to grab people's attention. Did it work? Two short essays..one about fave word and one about country music. And another one about..hmm..I don't even knwo if it is a good topic. Still interested Penn_dreamer?</p>
<p>To be honest, not really. But you did get my attention though.......for a minute.</p>
<p>Can you at least tell me if the commas and just grammar of this complicated sentence is correct?</p>
<p>From belly dancing through my life to the cosmic power of the Bulgarian folkloric voice; from the gypsy rhythms and classical music to the fresh pulse of electronic music, all my life I had engaged my ears and mind with a rich diversity of melody and tempo.</p>
<p>i was kidding about the picture.</p>
<p>Goes to show you that I am serious about this whole thing. Even with the pic, still no help.</p>
<p>Looks don't get anyone into college...</p>
<p>True...unless you are a famous actor maybe. Plus, the admission office will not see a picture of me. The person asked for my picture even though I was not expecting anyone to do it. Still, I kept my promise and he kept his. He did indeed give me valuable advice on my essays afterwords. So, no worries about my looks. :)</p>
<p>The semicolon in your sentence is incorrect. A semicolon joins two related independent clauses. The beginning of your sentence is a dependent clause. A comma would be acceptable.</p>
<p>The rest is gramatically correct.</p>