I completed my masterpiece, care to take a read

College Essays
1

<p>Honest critiques only, also kind of harsh ones are somewhat preferred</p>

<p>any changes i could make to the writing to make it flow better/be smoother is always welcome</p>

2

<p>I wouldn’t mind checking it out. Willing to offer my essays as security that I won’t steal your stuff (really just a way to get people to critique my essay). So, an “I’ll show you mine if you show me yours” situation. Deal?</p>

3

<p>sure</p>

<p>______________________-</p>

4

<p>i’ll send it tomorrow</p>

<p>i’m going to bed right now</p>

5

<p>good night. the email is <a href="mailto:trimanx123■■■■■■.com">trimanx123■■■■■■.com</a></p>

6

<p>bump
…</p>

7

<p>I’ll help you out. Send me a pm and I’ll critique the **** out of it :D</p>

8

<p>Ill be glad to help.Pm it over to me</p>

9

<p>i would love 2 read and critque</p>

10

<p>I’ll read it if you still need help.</p>

11

<p>If you still need help, PM me.</p>

12

<p>i’ll help, pm me</p>