Just another cliche essay or is it 1 of the best youve read?

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys!
I need critique/editing (if you want to edit). Only critiquing is fine.
Let me know!!
Accepting everyone to read/critique.</p>

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<p>note- post your emails so I can email it to you as an attachment.</p>

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<p>PM me. I think I’ve read one or two of yours before and they were pretty good. I’d rather just get a PM than an email.</p>

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<p>Sent.
Bump!</p>

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<p>u can PM me</p>

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<p>Ok pm me :)</p>

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<p>hey, i’m willing to give it a shot! pm me</p>

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<p>Sent to all three of yous!
Bump!</p>

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<p>PM me. i’ll read.</p>

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<p>CodeH I already sent it to you and you responded. Thank you =D</p>

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<p>np! GL :)…</p>

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<p>Thank you!!
Anymore people?
No one else really responded to the essay I sent them =(</p>

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<p>PM me and I will read. Give me the prompt too, so I know what it is asking.</p>

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<p>PM me. If you wouldn’t mind, can you review mine too?</p>

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<p>Sent it to both of you’s.</p>

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<p>I could help you and give you my personal opinion. You can PM or email me.</p>

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<p>You can PM me, as well. I should be writing my prospectus for my major department, but why not. After all, I feel like procrastinating…:(</p>

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<p>Bump Bump!</p>

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<p>lol 10 readers not enough? PM me anyway, I’m not bad at critique/edit :)</p>

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<p>I’ll critique by tonight. PM!</p>