I have had a very rough upbringing/ complicated life story, long post below Chance me for transfer?

Sorry in advance for the long post.

I’m only nineteen years old, and ever since I was born, my life was less than ideal.

I was born in an incredibly poor, incredibly rural mountain town that was hours from any type of city. I’m talking nearly an hour to the nearest Walmart or any kind of shopping center. In my hometown, there were 3 stoplights, three fast food restaurants, two local restaurants, one grocery store, two gas stations, a dollar store, and lots of churches. Nearest community college is 45 minutes in the other direction. We had no middle school or pre-k. You would not find anything close to modern infrastructure unless you drove incredibly far away from our podunk little settlement.

Growing up in this kind of environment was incredibly rough for me. There is no diversity of ideas or culture, and everyone treats their religion as something akin to a cult. If you were not Christian, people believed you were mentally ill. Almost every single person in my family believes that a lack of faith is an illness, quite literally. Most people in my town were alcoholics or drug addicts, simply because there was no way to escape the lifestyle. The majority of my neighbors were stuck in a kind of purgatory, too poor to move away to a real town or city, but too rich to know how to spend their money in such a stifling atmosphere. Thus, this majority sought out some kind of thrill, whether it be drugs, alcohol, friday night football, or dangerous motor sports. But the most popular pastime was addiction.

My father was one of those alcoholics. My mother worked in a medical center 2 hours from our home, and she had nothing to do with her firstborn child. All of my childhood memories involve my father or my grandparents. My parents split up when I was two years old, and thus began the tug of war over my fate that took place between my maternal and paternal grandparents.

My father was too poor to afford our own home until I was 9 years old, so for awhile, I lived with my mom’s parents. My whole family resided in this awful town, but my grandparent’s house was almost an escape from the harsh realities of our location. I wish I lived there permanently. My mother lived there, but I never saw her or really interacted with her. She had nothing to do with me. My only fond memories from childhood are working in my grandparents’ garden, learning how to hoe the fields, plant the beans, and dig little ditches in the rocky soil so that the fertilizer could be spread. My favorite time of year was going to the farmer’s market and seeing the culmination of everyone’s hard work in the fields.

I raised baby chickens in my bathroom, and went on runs with my grandparents to trade eggs. I learned how to cook the vegetables that we had grown, and how to sew my own clothes. Yet, my fun at home could not overshadow how hard of a time that I had at school.

My elementary school had around 200 kids in total. Same people from birth to graduation. I was always different from other children. I was one of maybe 6 children who did not play sports. I loved to read and I loved to learn about computers. Our school required you to read around 5 books every semester, but I always won awards for reading over 75 books every consecutive year. I questioned the biblical teachings that were being shoehorned into our public schools, even as a child, I did not have much faith, and it made me an outsider among my peers. I had sensory issues with clothing and sensations, and I did not know how to interact with other children. They would not play with me, and I had no friends. I was not diagnosed with autism until 17 years of age, mainly because not a single soul in my town knew what autism was. However, I remember sobbing in my fourth grade classroom because the other children had made fun of me for having a crush on a character in one of my favorite books. I spoke about my interests almost obsessively, until it was bullied out of me.

Then halfway through elementary school, my father took me back and brought me into a house with his disabled sister, and his parents. Ever since I was small, my father’s parents- who I’ll refer to as gran and granp for clarity and distinction from my other grandparents- judged me and wanted me to conform to their standards. My gran was shichzophrenic, and would constantly throw screaming and crying fits, often directed towards me. She yelled at my father, berated him, and made his drinking habits get worse. My father became violent, and would smash the glass cabinets in our house, smash our dishware, and just throw around whatever he saw fit.

I recall being 9 years old, and my father taking a crying and screaming spell after drinking a bottle of liquor. He put a gun to his head in front of me. My granps stopped him, but I’ll never forget the sound of my father crying and my granps cleaning up shards of glass.

Over the next year, my father threw a series of wild parties. One time, a woman burnt off a strand of my hair with her cigarette. Another time, a man broke into our home, stole all our belongings, and slashed open all my stuffed animals in search for drugs. When I was 10 years old, my father was killed by a drunk driver. From that point on, my gran and granps had me in their care, although my custody had never been changed over from my mother. My house burned down that same year, and so my aunt, my gran, my gramps and I all moved into the old family home. I became my aunt’s caretaker.

She had a stint where she had to be placed in a nursing home, and my 11 year old self practically lived there. I did my homework there, had my own bed, and socialized with the other residents. No one stopped to think that it was messed up to stick a kid into a nursing home to act as a secondary caretaker. Whenever she moved back home, I was responsible for making a lot of her meals, doing the dishes, cleaning the house, taking care of her animals, and fetching whatever she needed. Around my 7th grade year, the bullying I faced at school increased substantially. To the point where I was getting beaten up.

I got my lip busted in for saying that I thought a boy in my grade was cute and I liked him. Apparently I was obsessive and annoying, and he was another girl’s boyfriend. So trying to act normal had backfired on me. I was “weird” and I deserved to get a beating. I got tripped in the hallways. People laughed and made fun of me on a daily basis. I was that person that people asked out as a joke when they made bets with their friends.

At the same time, I was beginning to realize I liked girls, as well as boys. My gran tore into me, saying I was going to hell, and that I was not my father’s child- “He always made fun of those QUEERS!” One of the girls at my school started sending me death threats over that boy she liked, and said my gran was going to hell because she’d been admitted to a psych hospital for a suicide attempt. She made fun of my father dying. At that point, I had to start going to another school 45 minutes away. Still in another dilapidated podunk town, but at least I had new classmates. For awhile, I was very happy there. Still made fun of for being weird, and for being gay, but I made two friends in my class for the very first time. I was placed in accelerated/gifted learning. I was excited when it came time to attend high school, the so called best time of one’s life.

During my freshman orientation, I had an upperclassman as my tour guide, who became my very first high school friend. He wanted to date me, and around two months into my high school career, he molested me. I told my mother and my father’s parents that I wanted to be taken out of school. When I told them why, they forced me to report to the police. I was laughed at by school administrators because there was no real ‘evidence’, despite my abuse happening in a public place. It wasn’t penile penetration, so my case was treated like a joke. People at my school called me a lying insert the s and w slurs here because it keeps deleting my post over them. shaved off all my hair and decided that I was going to be a boy from then on, because I would always be abused as a woman. I was withdrawn from school and placed into a Christian homeschool program until my junior year.

The next two years were the hardest times of my life. I had no guidance or teaching, so my once perfect grades has slipped. I didn’t get to choose my classes, and they were all online. I had no one to interact with besides my dad’s family that screamed at me and scolded me all the time. They made fun of me for liking anime and playing video games. They called me the r word. My aunt and my gran both had Bipolar Disorder, and they got into screaming matches that lasted for days. They even hit each other. They screamed at me and threw and broke things in the same fashion that my father would. I wasn’t allowed to go outside or have any friends for over a year because, “I might go get raped again.” My aunt whom I cared for tried to kill herself, and my gran and gramps said it was my fault. They complained because they had to buy food for me. They would box up my belongings and throw them outside every time I would try to visit my other grandparents and my baby brother and sister.

It wasn’t until the summer before my junior year that one of my friends from middle school and her parents stepped in, saying they would provide me a home if my family would let me go back to school. They did not know that I had been raped. But at this point, my rapist had graduated, and I was allowed to return to high school. I took an aptitude test before I returned, and the proctor told me that I needed to be taking college courses. That I was ready to go to college then and there if only I had enough credits to graduate. My school did not have a lot of classes because we lived in such a rural, poor location, and all of our funding went into sports. Still, I took the most rigorous course load possible. We were allowed only 4 classes, and my junior year, I took 3 AP classes and one graduation requirement per semester. Senior year, I took 2 AP classes, two honors classes, and two grad requirements. I had taken every single AP at my school except for one by the time I graduated.

I enjoyed living with my friend, even though I was unaware that her parents were trying to steal money from the social security check that I got once my father died. They began demanding money every single month, and I was forced to pay out unless I wanted to go back to my abusive home. I had always lived in poverty, but her family was even poorer than mine. I didn’t eat a lot of food, and I never got any new clothes. Her parents spend the money that they were supposed to be caring for me with on luxury items rather than necessities. I tried to tell my friend this but she would take her parent’s side and say that they needed the money. Some nights I would go to bed starving because of this.

I did not have a better time at school than at home either. People remembered that I had been molested, and they held it over my head. Teachers didn’t treat me the same. I had the second highest ACT/SAT score in my entire school, beat only by a transfer student, but I was still treated like an idiot. In my AP US history class, my homework and essay responses would be nearly identical to my peers’, but I got consistently lower grades. One time we had to do a timeline drawing assignment, and the teacher counted off 15 points because she said she didn’t like my handwriting or the colors that I used. I scored higher on the AP test than anyone else in the class. She gave me a failing grade on a research paper that had been reviewed my other faculty members and students, because she didn’t like how I formatted my sources page. Another teacher gave me a low grade on a gay rights essay because she said the subject matter was not a real issue.

I knew I was not stupid, but I was getting lower grades than my classmates, and it was frustrating. I also began suffering from severe depression, anxiety, and fatigue during my first year of high school, and had lots of doctors appointments trying to figure out what was wrong. Every day that I missed, my teachers gave me a 0. But I knew I was capable of so much more that. My ap us teacher would take me into her office and berate me for being sick and missing days, which made my anxiety so much worse. My last semester of senior year, I got walking pneumonia and missed 1 month of school. I got 3 B’s and a C because my teachers said I was lazy and wanted to skip school even though I had documentation from the ER and my therapist. One of the teachers was friends with my rapist. After I showed the school documentation of my autism diagnosis, I was treated even worse and given no IEP or assistance.

Before my senior year, I took an online class so that I could graduate on time. I saw that the program offered computer science courses. Before school started, I went to the principal and asked if I could take one of those courses, because our school offered 0 computer courses and I wanted to major in comp sci. He said, “Sweetheart we can’t make special exceptions for you. If you don’t do your work, you’ll fail the class and we have to be held responsible. We have no faculty here that could assist you, and you’d have to pay us to hire someone to supervise the course. It’s not happening.” I got a 100 in my online class, so this was insulting when he told me that I did not do my work. I find out a few weeks later that a girl in my class has been taking computer science courses online, paid for by the school. And I was just heartbroken.

My second semester of senior year, I also left my friend’s home and was temporarily homeless. I couldn’t take the mistreatment, and the way they took everything I had from me. They even let one of my pets die because they said it was a waste of money to take my cat to the vet. I briefly got into a bad crowd, because the only home I could find was with a girl in alternative school, who promptly kicked me out a month before graduation and left me scrambling for a home again.

I was in the science club in high school and did a lot of community service. I did a research project that won awards at my school and placed 2nd in the regional competition, and I won a participation award at state. I began teaching myself Japanese at age 16 because it wasn’t offered at school. I was a member of National Honor society and did some community service through that club as well. Starting summer of junior year when I could drive, I had two different jobs during the year which took up most of my time. I was president of the gay straight alliance, and I was a member of the school leadership team. I was also a head editor for our school literary journal/publishing site. I was on the committee that chose books for the library. I won the highest level of a state writing award for my piece about being bisexual. I won an AP scholar with honor award. But when it came time to apply to college, I got in practically nowhere because my GPA was a 3.8 weighted and 3.4 unweighted, and a 30 ACT. My school counselor told me that I should iust go to community college (despite the fact that I would still have to move hours away to go to CC) because I was not competitive enough for a 4 year college. I graduated in 2017 with a heavy heart, and immediately got out of my area.

I went to a regional college for a semester because I wasn’t accepted anywhere else, got into honors college, and then applied to transfer after a semester because my major wasn’t offered. I got into a school that’s ranked in the top 60, but it’s extremely expensive. I got accepted but deferred my enrollment last spring. My grandfather was terminally ill due to his previous lines of work, and I wanted to spend time with him. I began working as well in order to support myself now that I was 3 hours from home, and pay for college because FAFSA counts my mother’s income against me. I began dating a man who was verbally abusive and controlling towards me. One of his friends violently raped me around 5 months ago. I am still traumatized. My grandfather that I adored passed away. I began pouring myself into my job, started learning music because I never had the opportunity to at home, and enrolled in summer classes in community college to try and help me process my hurt.

I enrolled in college again this fall, and if I keep my grades up, I should have a 3.76 GPA by the end of this semester. I am a double major, a member of student council, a competitor at hackathon, a member of an artificial intelligence research project, an employee at an IT center, an intern for a programming company, a taekwondo student, and a violin player. I am also trying to get involved with LGBT student orgs on campus. I also was selected for an international philanthropy meeting, and my goal is to create legislation against bullying of LGBT students as well as student organizations. I am taking 7 courses and about half of them are upper level despite me only completing 1 semester of college. It is my absolute dream to attend brown university, NU, or Dartmouth because of the quarter systems/open curriculum, but whenever I compare myself to the kids in some college app communities, they say I have no chance. People who have all these opportunities and amazing grades outshine me in every way, and it does bring me down at times.

I am applying to transfer for next year because my current school is extremely expensive, and instated new financial aid policies this year as well as policies that do not allow undergrads who are pursuing a BS to pursue a double major with a BA, we also can no longer take graduate courses. I want a university that better suits my needs and my goals for the future, that also offers need based fin aid (my school does not) but I’m scared my past will hinder me from my dreams. I was recently diagnosed with some autoimmune issues that explain my years of fatigue and declining health in high school. I will retake my SAT for a higher score to try to make up for my high school grades, but my chances are still so slim. People tell me I have no chance because of my high school grades. But I had to overcome so much in my short lifetime.

I’ve worked so hard to be better than my troubled past, but I feel like I will never accomplish my dreams. I want to study beside the best of the best, and push myself academically. I want to have hope for my dreams of becoming a top notch programmer and translator. I want to be the very first person from my town who gets a computer science or Japanese degree.

Thank you for reading my ramblings. Is there a chance of there ever being a place for me at Northwestern or Brown?

I am not sure what 95% of your three incredibly long posts have to do with your question but yes, with a high GPA, great ECs and essays, and glowing recommendations you have a chance of transferring to these schools.

You may want to consider how you will pay if accepted. Transfer students are not treated the same as freshman applicants in most cases. Will you need FA?

@Nocreativity1 I will need aid. But I do have savings from when my father and grandfather passed. I want to focus on schools with good need based aid that offer aid to transfers

@TheMoreYouKow I wanted to give more perspective about hardships I’ve faced, because I know my story is a bit long. Would these hardships be an appropriate essay topic?

@Ginkou Unfortunately I can’t answer this question as I am not an expert in transfer admissions beyond the basics. I do hope that more qualified people will be able to give you advice on that. Good luck!

Transfer essays have changed. This year the common app seems to have found a vendor to handle the transfer apps and the personal essay is no longer the main essay for many schools.

Most schools want “why this school” essay.

If I were to advise you as my child, and understanding your childhood and how hard it is to escape rural poverty, my best advice would be the following–

  1. prepare an very good personal essay-- because some schools allow you to upload a personal essay or a writing supplement. The purpose of this essay is to help them like you and invite you to join them. Think of meeting a new person and writing a story for them so that once they read it they will invite you to their party. What kind of story would you like to hear if you met someone so that you invited them to your party? Choose one detail from your life, it doesn’t have to be profound, and tell that story with charm, dignity, humor if possible, and with excellent writing.

  2. prepare a "why X school’ essay for each school that interests you. This should be very carefully researched as far as what each school offers and what you can offer the school. See if you can figure out that school’s personality, culture, what courses that you might take, what activities you might participate in and otherwise contribute to that school’s community.

  3. if you feel that your hardships are an important part of your story, allude to them briefly. Choose one or two details, if you like, but choose them wisely. And then treat them as something that helped build your strength and resilience, your determination and your creativity – something positive in you today that you can bring to the school. Remember the beauty of your upbringing too. That can help temper the difficulties. The tone is “While life had its difficulties, I found my strength through my experience.”

  4. Research schools carefully to find the ones offering FA to transfer students. You may want to consider Union in NY, Hamilton I believe also offers transfer FA; Vassar takes few transfers but the FA is excellent. Also look into St. Olaf. For Japan interest, you may want to look at Vassar and Earlham – has a Japan program. Connecticut College has programming and you can take advanced classes across the street at the service academy, but I’m less clear about Japan. Note that once you graduate you could possibly focus on Japan then, if your undergrad doesn’t have it, by looking at the JET program https://jetprogramusa.org/ If you’re interested in Connecticut College then you may want to read this thread to help you understand the culture of Connecticut College. Research like this will help your application stand out – http://talk.qa.collegeconfidential.com/connecticut-college/2031838-would-love-to-hear-more-about-connecticut-college.html#latest

Best of luck to you.

The problem with transferring is that credits don’t always transfer. It’s not unusual for a transfer to set you back a year or more. That would jeopardize your financial aid far more than your situation right now. Financial aid has limits, especially if you want to be a double major. If you can still afford where you’re going, it would be a good idea just to stay. Transferring is most often not a cost effective solution. If you’re doing computer science, there’s no need for prestige.

I think your backstory is very compelling, and you should share it because it is so intrinsic to your personality and who you are. You have overcome a lot and for that you should be proud. Financially, though, you are better off finishing where you are (if you’re at a four year school) and then applying to grad school at Northwestern or Brown. Transfer students have tougher admission odds to begin with (especially in STEM majors), and tend to be at the back of the line when it comes to FA.

Did you research Northwestern? It is a fantastic school but the co-op program can make it difficult (not impossible) to graduate in four years. Given your history of starts and stops, coupled with being a transfer and your need for aid, that may not be the best undergrad match for you. For graduate school, however, you’re building a very strong undergraduate record and you’ll be working with a fresh slate.

@Groundwork2022 Isn’t the co-op program for McCormick students only? I looked into it but it seemed to be for Engineering majors. I will be applying to Weinburg because of my double major, so I’m not sure how that works. I will be visiting Northwestern soon for the very first time, so I’ll make sure to ask admissions all of these good questions that you’ve brought up! I applied to Northwestern early decision in high school and was rejected, it was my top choice. I love the quarter system, the intellectual curiosity and the ability to focus on multiple fields of study at once, the smaller/more moderately sized campus, the distance from Chicago, the course offerings, the faculty in my departments and the research they are doing. The quarter system should allow me to graduate sooner than doing full semesters, I believe, but I’m not positive.

I don’t mind spending extra time getting my degree as long as the cost isn’t nominal, I did take a semester off after all, but as long as the out of pocket cost doesn’t exceed 10k, my family is willing to pitch in. My EFC on fafsa is 3k, for context. My current school is much more expensive than what the net price calculators run for the schools I’m applying to, and I’ve tried to do some research on the financial aid packages that other transfers have gotten, although it’s mostly word of mouth and there no official figures that I know of. I am only applying to schools that promise to meet full need, as well as my state school UNC Chapel Hill. (which I have been rejected from both times I applied, I did not really like the campus when I visited and didn’t seem like a good fit for me though)

My list at the moment is: Brown, Northwestern, Stanford, Dartmouth, Uchicago, Vanderbuilt, Washington U of St. Louis, Carnegie Mellon, Cornell, USC, UNC Chapel Hill, Wake Forest, maybe Yale because I am very interested in their resources for research, especially their library, but I do realize it’s a very slim chance. I did not apply to any of these schools as a high schooler except NU, Uchicago (because of their No borders initiative for helping low income students) and UNC, so I have no idea where I stand.

There aren’t really any local scholarships that I can apply for, are there any other good sources for financial aid besides FAFSA and the CSS profile?

All the schools you listed are reaches for everyone. The kids who get in have proven records of success. Not many drop out, which means there are precious few transfer opportunities into those places.

You were dealt a terrible hand, but unfortunately your resulting history of stops and starts is not going to convince them that you have what it takes to stick it out at their school. You’re bright, but not yet accomplished. You have potential, but those colleges have a reputation to protect and they want a sure thing.

The best chance you have is to stick it out at your current school (hopefully it’s a four-year school), keep up your grades, and build a resume of long term commitments and accomplishments. Those dream schools will still be there in four years.

There are scholarships for upper classmen. Search the CC boards to help point you in the right direction. The most money is likely to come from FAFSA and CSS and the schools themselves, though.

I’m wondering if there is a way for you to be declared an independent student…?