I just finished my essay! anyone want to read it?

<p>i did the topic "helade, place having everything right". Do people who arent applying this year want to read it? this is just a rough draft, so tell me what you think.
feedback would be excellent!
thanks!</p>

<p>oh and i will pm it to those who want to read it.</p>

<p>yes i would like to.</p>

<p>I'd love to read it, give you my 2 cents as well ;)</p>

<p>Me too! mail to me <a href="mailto:viva0yue@gmail.com">viva0yue@gmail.com</a>
all the best!</p>

<p>I'll read it, PM me.</p>

<p>PM it to me, I'd love to read it.</p>

<p>I would love to read it as well. I'm applying to Chicago but as a transfer student for the class of 2010, so I'm not competing with you in any way.</p>

<p>Sure I would.</p>

<p>PM me, i would like to read it...</p>

<p>sure id like to read it pm me, my mother is an adcom.</p>

<p>sure!! PM me.</p>

<p>Sure why not.</p>

<p>Oh man, UC essays are the best, I'll read it.</p>

<p>PM me and i'll read!</p>

<p>pm me
i would like to read it.</p>

<p>PM me, :D!</p>

<p>please pm me too</p>

<p>PM it, I know a couple of people who are doing that essay and I'l tell you how it compares to theirs.</p>

<p>please do it for me
either PM me or mail me at <a href="mailto:punj33@hotmail.com">punj33@hotmail.com</a>
i'd delighted at the later</p>