I just finished my essay for Pepperdine, but I feel that it is TOO religious...help?

<p>The prompt is: Pepperdine's scholarly community equips students with a liberal arts education anchored in Christian values. Our commitment to integrating faith and learning challenges our students to understand that the gift of knowledge ultimately calls for a life of service. With this commitment in mind, please respond: Tell us how the integration of faith and learning can prepare you for a life of service, and discuss the impact service-learning can have on the renewing of your mind, spirit, and community. (500 words or less)</p>

<p>So, I interpreted it that there has to be some sort of faith-based element, but I feel like my essay is a bit overwhelmingly religious. Can any good readers help me out -- I'll PM you my essay :)</p>

<p>i’ll read it for you! :)</p>

<p>I’d be happy to give it a read!</p>

<p>id be happy to help you with your essay…:slight_smile:
i am a senior an currently taking AP English so I’m sure i can help you out!</p>