I love you Gtown, will you love me?

<p>I would love to go to SFS
California
GPA 4.68, UW 3.92 (I got one B in honors freshman math the heart break )
I don't think you need to see my freshman/shoph classes they were solid I promise o but i took ap euro in 10th grade rest all honors
ACT: 31 (weakest part of my application) SAT II: 730 US History more to come
All A's...
Junior Year:
AP Lang Comp
AP Envi Sci
AP US
Spanish 4
Pre-calc/Trig
Art History at community college
Model United Nations ( at my school its a class) </p>

<p>Senior Year:
AP Lit
AP Gov
AP Econ (micro and macro)
AP Comp Gov/ AP HUman Geography
AP Calc AB (I have so much respect for crazy BCers)
Physics Honors
Model United Nations
Mock Trial (also a class) </p>

<p>Here is my EC resume
Acedemics
1) Will graduate with honors from the Palos Verdes International
Department, a special program and curriculum designed for
internationally focused students
2) National recipient of the Fredrick Douglass and Susan B. Anthony
Award in Humanities and Social Sciences, for a dedication to social
justice
3) The South Bay’s Delegate to the Hugh O’Brian Youth Leadership
Conference
4) AP Scholar with Honor: European History: 5, American History: 5,
English Language and Composition: 5, Environmental Science: 5
5) Secretary of National Honor Society
6) Athletic Scholar
7) Principal’s Honor Roll and member of California Scholarship
Federation</p>

<p>International, Political and Cultural Extracurricular Activities.
1) Volunteer for California Peace Action, which promotes an
alternative, diplomacy-based foreign policy through grass roots efforts
(3 years over 110 hours)
2) Volunteer/backpacker in the Fijian Highlands, working to promote
infrastructure development, focused especially in sanitation (1 month)
3) Volunteer for Senator Obama’s Campaign, attended Camp Obama and
currently works extensively in youth outreach
4) Girl Scout Gold and Silver Award Recipient- developed a cultural
education curriculum and taught over 250 children over a span of two
months
a. Girl Scout Leadership Award Recipient
5) Model United Nations’ Secretary General, former Freshman trainer,
organizes 8 conferences a year including Berkeley, Georgetown, and
UCLA, has won ten awards including three “Gavels”-Best Delegate
6) Mock Trail-Pre-Trial Lawyer (1 year)
7) JHU’s Center for Talented Youth- classes in The United Nations, Law
and Politics, Geopolitics, and The History of Arab Conflict and the
Effect of Islam
8) Independent study at local Mosque (1 Semester)
9) Language intensive exchange in Spain (1 month)
10) Volunteer translator for Los Angeles Orthopedic Hospital (4 years
over 130 hours)
11) Spanish Honor Society
Athletics and Interests
1) Active member of St. Peter’s By the Sea Church, part of the Student
Appointed Leadership Team, sings in the choir, dances for the lyrical
group, teaches Sunday School and goes on annual mission trips to Mexico
to build homes
2) Las Niñas Service Guild, has contributed over 400 hours over 4 years
to the community through various projects, including recent work with
the local women’s shelter, class representative and hospitality chair
on the governing board
3) Varsity Lacrosse for four years (Team Spirit Award), two years
junior varsity golf, and 8 years of dedicated yoga practice
4) Link Crew Team Leader (2 years)
5) Four year member of Red Tide, PV’s beloved basketball student
cheering section</p>

<p>It looks like a realistic reach, meaning you have a better chance than most.</p>

<p>I think you could organize your application better and choose which activities are most important to you and then highlight those. It's confusing when so many things are crammed together...</p>

<p>yeah of course just for cc's purpose squished seemed a better than like a full page post, i can fix it if its that terrible</p>