I need an opinion and possible correcting on my essay :)

<p>Hello everybody!
If any of you is interested in reading my essay, let me know. :)</p>

<p>what prompt on the common app did you choose?</p>

<p>The fifth one</p>

<p>Anybody? :(</p>

<p>i’ll read it :D</p>

<p>Considering I’m a year older than you, I’m sorry, but I don’t think you make the cut… I’d like someone older to look at it :)</p>

<p>I can read your essay!! PM me if you like</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read it! :slight_smile: I have extensive experience with editing essays, both on CC.com and as a coach at my school’s writing center, so hopefully I can be of some help to you :stuck_out_tongue: Just PM me and I’ll give you my email address.</p>

<p>send me through pm.</p>

<p>I would read it as well. Send me an PM with your mail so I can answer you.</p>

<p>i would like to read it for you.</p>