I need opinions on my COMMON APP essay

College Essays
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<p>I have two different essays.
at this point, i'm just looking for quick opinions --not in-depth constructive criticism-- on which essay would better suit the Common App version i will be sending for Brown PLME.
more details will be in PMs after people respond to this.</p>

<p>i need opinions
thanks in advance !!</p>

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<p>ill read it. i did UR's rems program</p>

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<p>i applied a couple days ago to brown not plme, but ive read many brown essays.</p>

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<p>i have 2 common app essays too and im asking for the same thing, can we switch ? :)</p>

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<p>I'll read it!</p>