<p>If anyone could give my essay a look over I would really appreciate it. Forewarning: it's almost a thousand words.</p>
<p>The prompt is: "The quality of Rice's academic life and the Residential College System are heavily influenced by the unique life experiences and cultural traditions each student brings. What perspective do you feel that you will contribute to life at Rice? (Most applicants are able to respond successfully in two to three double-spaced pages.)"</p>