My admissions counselor made notes and changes to my essay, but I feel she just made it worse. I would truly appreciate if anyone could read it and tell me your opinion. Also, any advice would mean the world to me! If so I will PM or email you my essay. Thank you!
Please? Essay is due tomorrow !
Yes. I’ll read. Probably can’t get to it until about 4 pm California time, however.
I am by no means an expert, but I would love to read/give feedback.
Counselor sometimes is just not helpful. Believe in yourself @nrivera12
@deeznuts Thank you so much!! Pm or maybe email you?
@“About Time” I’m on the east coast but I wouldn’t mind waiting until late! 
I’m home earlier than expected. You can send it to me here at CC or to my same user name as gmail address.
@“About Time” Sent it. Let me know if you got it!