i thought and wrote for 2 months, and i came up with this...

<p>PM me and i'll get back to you within a day</p>

<p>can the people i sent my essay to please comment me back about it? thanks</p>

<p>PM me please.</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>I have heard your voice, for sure. However, you need to show you are a good person, looking at the world in a more positive way than you do now. I am sure you are a good student. In a competition to get in, you have to show signs of commitment and dedication to your friends and to your school. A good point is that you have mastered the language arts very well.</p>

<p>Sounds Interesting! I would like to help!</p>