<p>It feels like it's too similar to a school essay for me.. Has like a 5 paragraph structure with 3 bodies, intro, and conclusion...</p>
<p>Post here and I'll PM to most of you guys if you're willing to give feedback on it.</p>
<p>I don't really think anyone could jack my essay because I talk about my family. So if you were planning on jacking my essay don't post hahaha.</p>
<p>Oh yeah, and it's quite a monster. 800 words.</p>