I'd really appreciate some opinions on my whyduke essay

<p>If anyone that has already been accepted would like to look over my why duke essay, that would be really helpful. I would like to hear some feedback on how well I meshed my interests with what Duke has to offer and whether it was awfully boring to read or maybe even a little interesting? :) Please help me by giving me your first and last impressions on it!</p>

<p>I was accepted ED and I'd be glad to read it. Just PM it to me :)</p>