IM FREAKING OUT!! Can I make it to a TOP lac with this essay?

<p>Okay, I basically have three college essays, and up until ten minutes ago I thought this one belonged to the trash. For some reason I don't like this essay, but it's very personal and all my friends think this one is my best, contradictory to what I think... I'm only going to share one with people who post here... </p>

<p>I'm just wondering if my essay has what it takes for TOP liberal arts colleges.. I want HONEST opinions.. any takers!?</p>

<p>I also ask that you will be able to reply within an hour or so of posting..</p>

<p>i'll read + critique it PM me</p>

<p>btw i'll reply asap right after i finish reading ur essay</p>

<p>ill read and give my opinion pm it.</p>

<p>i'll read it and give an opinion but I'm new to CC so maybe my opinion is unwanted...</p>

<p>i'll read and critique</p>

<p>I'll read it gladly.</p>

<p>Give me a read</p>

<p>i'd like to read it too.</p>

<p>Adult college parent will read & critique your essays if you want my perspective.</p>

<p>i'd be happy to read it, but i'm new to CC so iono if you'd want me to read it</p>