in need of essay review

<p>hi fellow stressed out people!! </p>

<p>i have been struggling for the past few weeks trying to answer the common app questions. I'm usually a strong writer and it's been puzzling for me to try to figure out what to write about. I wrote a rough draft of prompt #1, which is to write about a story that is central to you and basically makes you who your are. I realize most people went with this... i originally wrote #3 but hated the script. If someone, anyone is willing to just read it and give me some feedback, that would be majorly appreciated. My parents don't speak english and all my teachers seem so caught up in writing letters of rec and regular school that they haven't really gotten back to me. </p>

<p>Comment below if you'll read it and I'll message you it!!!</p>

<p>Thank you so much in advance</p>

<p>I’ll take a look! Just PM me</p>