<p>It would be great if someone could critique my essay.</p>
<p>It is still unedited. It may lack stucture and flow, but i would like the criticism on its raw form. I will pm... Thanks in advance...</p>
<p>PM me! I can take a look..</p>
<p>Me too, I'm on an analyzing roll at the moment...</p>
<p>i'd love to help. PM me!</p>
<p>i would love to critique it</p>
<p>I'll take a look and critique it for you! Just PM me</p>
<p>PM if you need additional reviews.</p>
<p>I've helped enderken, tonyspizza1149, and azndx in the past week. Look at my posts for proof.</p>
<p>Send it over, I'll help you out.</p>