Is anyone willing to read my roommate essay?

<p>I composed it in about 30 minutes, and there are probably lots of grammatical errors, but I want other opinions on it too. I can read others as well. I'll pm you if you reply on the thread. thanks for the help guys, and good luck on getting in to the colleges you want. I won't be able to send it until tomorrow because I'm going to bed.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it.</p>

<p>any other takers, I’m online now and will be for a while. I can help you guys out too.</p>

<p>102 views and only one willing person. what about by what matters to you and why essay, it’s about my horse</p>

<p>I’ll take a read :)</p>

<p>I’ll look :)</p>

<p>I’ll look if you still need someone to read through it.</p>

<p>i pm’d all of you, thanks so much for the help!</p>

<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

<p>I can read a second draft, if you’d like.</p>

<p>Mimi5876, I can read one or both of them!</p>

<p>I will read it! Please PM me!</p>

<p>I’ll read it! Send me a PM!</p>

<p>I sent all of you all three supplements, don’t feel like you need to critique all of them. these are all still first drafts. hopefully you all get the pm. thanks for the help!</p>

<p>also my one of my teachers wasn’t there before break so i have no clue if she’ll make the deadline. whats the latest she could submit the letter, she’ll be doing it online. also i haven’t sent my act/sat scores yet, should i put a rush on the scores or send it normally.</p>