<p>I wrote, what I think is, a very formal essay. It's also not very personal nor is it very specific. </p>
<p>I spent hours on this thing and I really wish I didn't have to write another one. In fact, I really, really hope I don't have to write another one! But at the same time I'm afraid that it's simply not what is expected. (However, the instructions on the common app are vague and has the option allowing me to write one on a topic of choice.)</p>
<p>Could someone take a look and give me some suggestions on what I should do, whether I should abandon it or keep it?</p>