<p>Hi everyone! I was just wondering if using one example is sufficient for a score greater than 10 on the SAT. I know length is important, and I do make sure I fill up the two pages and I usually use more than 400 words. I typically do my intro, one paragraph supporting one point, another paragraph supporting another point, and a conclusion. For example, if the prompt goes something like: "Is teamwork necessary for success, or can success be achieved single-handedly?" I would have an intro that states my view that teamwork is necessary; then, I would use my example to write a paragraph on why teamwork is needed for success; and after that, another paragraph using the same example to also explain why trying to achieve success on one's own is often more detrimental than beneficial. I not only provide details, but also observations and analysis. I summarize my observations in my conclusion and apply the concept to general human nature. Considering all of this, wouldl I be able to get above a 10 (hopefully a 12) on the SAT essay? Some people have told me that obtaining such a score by using just one example is a rare occurrence. </p>
<p>Unless that example has more than one dimension/perspective that can be explored from different angles, then no. </p>
<p>The purpose of having more than one example is to examine the issue from more than one angle and better support your argument. If your argument only works in one situation, then it’s not a solid argument.</p>
<p>Thank you, @LisaCF !</p>
<p>Use 2 solid examples. Refrain from personal examples unless it really relates and is a profound example, not something that seems made up on the spot.</p>
<p>It’s good to have examples from different areas to show your breadth of knowledge. I always picked history and lit, since that was easiest for me.</p>
<p>No.</p>
<p>Remember that 60 seconds is around the average time spent on reading an essay (they have a lot of essays to read, after all), so aim for an essay with at least two, (preferably three) examples.</p>
<p>There is a significant positive correlation between length and score, so using more than one example (seriously, just make up a book [it works]) is one of the easiest ways to increase your score.</p>
<p>It’s a twenty-five minute timed essay, so your examples (and their veracity) matters much less than how well you can explain them. It seems that you can explain your examples well, based on what you have provided, so throw in one or two extra, and your essay will be in a far better position.</p>
<p>Yea I got an 11( should have been a 12) with one example. However, my example was an in-depth example & by in-depth, I mean like 15-17 sentences long. Make sure your intro & conclusion are strong & include quotes.</p>
<p>One example is definitely enough. You make one example amazing by going really deep. </p>
<p>Thank you guys! So I guess what matters over number of examples is how well you express and organize your ideas, and how comfortable you are. Of course, length still matters. I usually used one example during my weekly exam and was scored 10-12 by the prep center’s graders (who grade much harder), but since I heard that it was not a good idea to use just one example, I tried to use two at the November SAT, could not articulate myself as well, and ended up with a 9. I’ll try going with what I’m comfortable with next week, and hopefully score in the double-digits. Thank you again for the help, everyone!</p>
<p>I’ve seen it work (and get a 12, even), but it’s harder than using two examples.</p>
<p>Most people feel comfortable with using two, but hey if one works and you can go in good depth without repeating yourself, then go for what feels right with you</p>