<p>I have been really involved in research in high school. My project turned out great, and it has major implications for the future of vaccine development. Is it a good approach in why Brown to discuss my research and how I am drawn to the undergraduate research opportunities available at Brown in order to continue to contribute to the dynamic world of science. I also discussed the work of Brown faculty that I particularly enjoyed. Will this make a good why Brown essay or is it too specific?</p>
<p>Hmmm… Can i see it?</p>
<p>I still have to put the finishing touches on it, but does it work conceptually?</p>
<p>Yes, absolutely. Specificity is hardly something to steer clear of!</p>
<p>Although I adore the open curriculum and it is a major reason why I want to go to brown, discussion of it will not fit anywhere in my essay. This will make me stand out in the applicant pool, correct? (not the generic “I love the open curriculum…” essay). However, it feels odd not to discuss something so major. Should I leave out specific research of brown faculty that I like or is this more important than talking about the open curriculum? I feel like talking about the open curriculum will be out of place but I want to include it. What to do?</p>